Good... But not Great....
This flash movie was good but not great... but since its your first time... good job...
-The graphics was nicely illustrated ...
-The style in which its based on is nothing I have seen thus far on New Grounds , speaking Japanese in which captivated the people that didn't know Japanese by its uses of the words, good job on that...
-The sound could be smoothed tho (but it was your first time).
-The violence has a nice blend to the story... unique in which Merin burned Rabbit-San and the whole house with it.
-The interactivity was a little crude, in which as you sound the same the whole story through...you didn't act as if you were mad or happy... you just sound mild... (You can do better on that.)
-The humor was a little corny, but it was funny when you watch the rabbit getting burned by the bits, as well as the father finding the house being burnt down.
-The overall score was fairly decent for a first timer... Good Job... But you can still reach GREAT... Just fix those minnor weak points of yours and you got your self a perfect flash movie.